Dream Deep

Hi there. I thought it was pretty good - as in, you wrote it very well - and I got an extremely good feel of your characters. For example, Brad's ...

Hooyah. Great job, Incandescence. I really liked how you made it easy for the reader (i.e. ME! :D ) to get into the character's mind and feelings. I don't like ...

Wow! I'm not the only person who thinks Bush is a demon. What fun! I loved your piece. You described everything very well and the demon's attitudes were just hysterical! ...

I loved it. I suppose it wasn't a master piece among haikus, but I really really liked it. Very well written. I know this is going to sound just a ...

Hi, Neost. This is really great. I like it better than With Six Legs. A lot less confusing, a lot more striking. Thumbs-up on this one. Absolutely brilliant . Loved ...

I guess this piece kind of had an effect on me because whenever I can't sleep I say my rosary. And mine used to be baby blue, believe it or ...

That was really good. It read like a song lyric, which made it even better. I really liked this. Here, I have to quote this: And why isn't it cohesive? ...

That was beautiful. Sheer, glorious... I don't know. Beauty. I loved it. Just one suggestion though. At the beginning, the piece seemed to flow, to rhyme in a very subtle ...

Okay. (I'm changing into my OBJECTVE LITTLE SISTER uniform now, just so you know). This is pretty good. But it doesn't flow. Here, see this? "Sir," Reyn puffed as he ...

WHAT WERE YOU THINKING? I kind of like how you write normally (I really liked "Your Third Eye") but seriously. I didn't get a word of that. I agree whole-heartedly ...

You wrote that very elegantly. I really liked it. I've never heard TOOL, but I think I know what you mean about the abstract weirdness of certain music helping you ...

I really like it. Especially this part: The old times when life seemed pointless. Now it is pointelss. That's really good. You said it very well, but can I say ...

I thought that was pretty good. I'm not really a music geek, though, I just happen to play the piano (which is a nice common instrument) and like old 70s-80s ...

Okay, this is completely objective and you're not allowed to take offense. Pretend I don't know you. It was good. It was promising. It was also rather mundane and emotionless. ...

What can I say? That was completely awesome. I loved it. Real surprise at the end, but a very fitting surprised. If you ever paln to do something with this, ...